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Song Information:

I lied when I said I had run out of songs. I still had another, this one. I didn't think I would do this song but here it is. I am not crazy about it at this point. I like it in general terms but I think the lyrics could be improved.
This is one of my very first "Off the cuff" songs. I did tweak the lyrics sometime back but I need to tweak them more. It's a rather sad sounding tune.
I do like the melody though!

Completely done in GarageBand except mastered using Tracktion.

Song Lyrics:

Oh Jamie, how y' been
Oh Jamie, now don't make a scene
I just stopped by 't tell y' why I have to talk to you
and I feel blue too.

Oh Jamie, how'd we go wrong
Oh Jamie, since you been gone
Friends feel bad n' say how sad
when I tell them 'bout you.
and they feel blue too.

Life's been like a cyclone racing by
The rain comes and the wind blows and
we run n' hide.
Somewhere in the shadows
the dark part of our minds
we need sunshine.

Oh Jamie, please come home again
Oh Jamie, you are my friend
things they will get better if we really want them to
do you feel blue

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life is like a cyclone racing by
The rain comes and the wind blows and
we run n' hide.
Somewhere in the shadows
the dark part of our minds
we need sunshine.

Oh Jamie, I been a fool
Oh Jamie, you have been too.
I guess that when it's said and done
I ain't said nothing new
and I feel blue too